Thursday, 30 April 2015

BEST FRIENDS. That's what we were!

A text message or a call would arrive punctually every few weeks. "Hi! How are you?", "I still miss us", "You were my only best friend blah blah blah blah" and when she did not reply to any of the texts and calls, "Maregi kutiya ki  maut" (Die bitch's death).

Two best friends who shared everything together (not). He was there for her when she went through her first heartbreak. She was all ears when he called her in the middle of the night and blabbered on how he just got laid. He helped her cheat in exams. She lied to his girlfriend about his whereabouts. He was there holding her hair when she puked her guts out all night. She was there when he took his first shot. Although they were best friends, they were as different as night and day. She liked trance music. He loved Latin pop. She was a hard core drinker and he could not even stand the smell of it. He wanted to be an IAS officer and she wanted to be a teacher. Others used to think they were a couple and they used to laugh it off.



What actually happens next?

They fell in love!!!


....to be continued



My first experience with words. Bear with me, please :)

11 comments:

  1. Well written Ruchi. I'm so proud of you girl. ❤

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  2. Lucid writing<3
    Great going!

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  3. Never thought the girl would be so good with her pen..!! <3 :-*

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  4. Awsum..😀
    Gud work..keep it up ✌

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  5. Excellent work :*
    Good job :D
    Waiting for more...

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  6. I know I'm no judge.. But you've written brilliant.. Your emotions have hit the right note.. I'm wonder-struck tbh!
    If your this good on your first try,I wonder what a amazing read it would be after you've improvised over the next months :)
    Way to go Ruchi :)

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  7. Very well written.. keep posting more. :)

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  8. It was more of a good teaser
    Keep on writing

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  9. They were angels for each other, n now just demons!

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  10. yeah.. keep it up... interesting coz written with transparency and spontaneity...!!!

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